This is pretty Nice. IMO, you should expand on the 2 seconds more, and make it sound more soulful and melancholy rather than kinda the depressed feel. Also I feel like the rather than the vocals being distorted, it could sound like it’s from a muffled phone or something. IF you ever make a remix, totally do that. Keep this tho, it’s growing on me.
Not much of a fan of the lyrics, but the beats are where it’s at; could you do an instrumental? Continue doing what you’re doing, dude
gives me the XXXTentacion vibe frr, it’s a good thing though! :)))
also, the harshest criticism i have is to change up the notes in the vocal part a bit. the same notes over and over, especially with the depressed feel, can get boring. Have some more contrast!